BlackBlade Rising

Lesson 1.12
December 3rd, 2009, 4:42 pm

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Amante
Posted by Amante
December 3rd, 2009, 4:42 pm

Ugh that cliff in the first panel came out so bad. I tried so hard to make it look good, but it just wasn't working.


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Interesting XD!

Hiro Ryuuzaki
Posted by Hiro Ryuuzaki
December 4th, 2009, 4:03 pm

Hirota's pissed. O.O



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Amante
Posted by Amante
December 4th, 2009, 6:43 pm

@Hiro Ryuuzaki: Yep, he sure is



rainysidewalks
Posted by rainysidewalks
December 5th, 2009, 7:23 am

hmm -- with the cliff, it would probably help if you gave some texture to the ground (rocks?) they're standing on as well as the cliff itself.

I like the contrast in the personalities of these two guys...one is yelling all along and the other is calm and cool until he snaps :)

btw, do you see it when I reply to your comments on my site, or should I post the reply on your site?



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Amante
Posted by Amante
December 5th, 2009, 8:30 pm

@Yuri-pad: well I'm not sure If it was apparent what happened, but Hirota had cracked open the ground with the attack he did on the last page.

Thy are actually standing on plains lol. As suggested by some_unknown_dude, I'm going to add some detail like grass and such whenever I get the chance.



Amante
Posted by Amante
December 14th, 2009, 2:42 am

@P!K: Awww, thank you! I'm still in the process of improving with my art though so hopefully one day i'll do even better! Thanks for the fav! <3



Profanity00
Posted by Profanity00
July 8th, 2010, 2:42 pm

I REALLY like the bottom left panel. Keeping his eyes out of the frame really makes it more intense.



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